Review

According an article of UNICEF, in late adolescence (15-19 years), men have(are) more likely to be sexually active high risk than women of same age group. Why is the statement thrue(true)? It is very simple because the hormones on men are more excited than women´s hormones. Also its(It is also) very important the place of(from) where is the people(are). That is a very important factor(.) for(For) example in(:) coast(coasts), borders and warm places its(it's) easier to have sex that(than in) other places.

The reason is that the hormonones are influenced by the altitude. At more altitude (it) is less posibility(possible) to get sex than (at) less altitude because of the weather. Also another reason is when the guy ask(asks) his girlfriend if she want(wants) to give him the test of love(.) A(a) lot of women think (about) the situation and ask herselves(themselves), why do I need to have sex? Those women are intelligent. But a lot of women don´t think(about) the situation and they are driven by her(their) boyfriend(boyfriends). Actually the religion(Religion) its(is) very important because it has(provides) the precepts(precept of not) to have(having) sex until the marriage. But again the decision its(is) crucial and depends of(on) each person. In the other hand we have men guys the most thing if it is a posibility to have sex they make. They(Men) don´t (usually) think in their future(,) only they (only) want to live the moment.

The problem to live the moment its(is) that the decisions (are) not always are the best. We need to think in our future. We need to take the right decisions to plan every day of the rest of our lifes(lives). Like a story said(which story?): "Are you living your life or you are wasting your life? If we were in bad situations that involve sex, you will think in your future what things do you want to make in yor life. And you will take the right decition. It is up to you, the desition its in our hands. We need to wait for marriage to have sex and give it to our wifes that incredible moment (to our wives). Now, are you going to get driven to have sex in adverse situations?

Oral Presentation

Why do teens think about sex?

According an article of UNICEF, in late adolescence (15-19 years), men have more likely to be sexually active high risk than women of same age group. Why is the statement thrue? It is very simple because the hormones on men are more excited than women´s hormones. Also its very important the place of where is the people. That is a very important factor for example in: coast, borders and warm places its easier to have sex that other places.

The reason is that the hormonones are influenced by the altitude. At more altitude is less posibility to get sex than less altitude because of the weather. Also another reason is when the guy ask his girlfriend if she want to give him the test of love. A lot of women think the situation and ask herselves, why do I need to have sex? Those women are intelligent. But a lot of women don´t think the situation and they are driven by her boyfriend. Actually the religion its very important because it has the precepts to have sex until the marriage. But again the decision its crucial and depends of each person. In the other hand we have men guys the most thing if it is a posibility to have sex they make. They don´t think in their future only they want to live the moment.

The problem to live the moment its that the decisions not always are the best. We need to think in our future. We need to take the right decisions to plan every day of the rest of our lifes. Like a story said: "Are you living your life or you are wasting your life? If we were in bad situations that involve sex, you will think in your future what things do you want to make in yor life. And you will take the right decition. It is up to you, the desition its in our hands. We need to wait for marriage to have sex and give it to our wifes that incredible moment. Now, are you going to get driven to have sex in adverse situations?

Effects of Smoking

When you started to smoke, did you imagine the diseases and the cost that it would include? The person who smokes has a lot of probabilities to get diseases for example: cancer, bad breath, and yellow teeth. The most dangerous is cancer because it kills the person in a slow way.The most common cancer is lung cancer. Bad breath is disgusting not for the smoker but it is unpleasant for the people who are around the puffer. Also the yellow teeth is a consequence of smoking frequently. The smokers will make anything to get their cigars. In the short term they could ask someone to lend them money so they can go buy their vice. In the long term they will have a debt and as a consequence of this they will have a lot of problems. Now, would you become a smoker, knowing the diseases and the cost of smoking?

Oral Presentation

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Effects of Smoking

When you started to smoke, did you imagine the diseases and the cost that it would include? The person who smokes has a lot of probabilities to get diseases for example: cancer, bad breath, and yellow teeth. The most dangerous is cancer because it kills the person in a slow way.The most common cancer is lung cancer. Bad breath is disgusting not for the smoker but it is unpleasant for the people who are around the puffer. Also the yellow teeth are a consequence of smoking frequently. The smokers will make anything to get their cigars. In the short term they could ask someone to lend them money so they can go buy their vice. In the long term they will have a debt and as a consequence of this they will have a lot of problems. Now, would you become a smoker, knowing the diseases and the cost of smoking?

Review

When you started to smoke, did you imagine the diseases and the cost that it would include? The person who smokes has a lot of probabilities to get diseases for example: cancer, bad breath, and yellow teeth. The most dangerous is cancer because it makes in a slow or quick way, kills the person (in a slow way) and (.)the(The) most common cancer is lung cancer. Bad breath is disagreeable(disgusting) no(not) for the smoker but (it) is unpleasant for the people who are around of (the) puffer. Also the yellow teeth are a consequence of smoking frequently. The smokers (will) make anything to get their cigars(.) those things are not good because may be they don’t have money to get cigars. The consequences of make anything to get cigars are in a short term and in a long term. In (the) short term they could ask someone to borrow(lend them) money (so) then they can go to buy (their vice). In a (the) long term they will have a debt and (as) a consequence of is that (this) they will have a lot of problems with the people who borrowed money. Now, if (would) you were a beginner (become a ) smoker, you will know(knowing) the diseases and the cost of smoking(.) (?)

Effects of Smoking

When you started to smoke, did you imagine the diseases and the cost that it would include? The person who smokes has a lot of probabilities to get diseases for example: cancer, bad breath, and yellow teeth. The most dangerous is cancer because it makes in a slow or quick way, kills the person and the most common cancer is lung cancer. Bad breath is disagreeable no for the smoker but is unpleasant for the people who are around of puffer. Also the yellow teeth are a consequence of smoking frequently. The smokers make anything to get their cigars those things are not good because may be they don’t have money to get cigars. The consequences of make anything to get cigars are in a short term and in a long term. In short term they could ask someone to borrow money then they can go to buy. In a long term they will have a debt and a consequence of is that they will have a lot of problems with the people who borrowed money. Now, if you were a beginner smoker, you will know the diseases and the cost of smoking.