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Why should the fast food be banned for young people under the age of 18?

The food is very important for the health of the people because it gives energy, force, and support for the body. There are a lot of different types of food, the health food and the fast food. The people like more the fast food than the health food. Why do the people like more the fast food? It is simply because the flavor of this food is delicious and probably this is for the amount of oil that this food has. The group of people that more likes this type of food is the young people under the age of 18. There are two important reasons why this type of food should be forbidden for those guys; to protect their health and to prevent an addiction.

For the people under the age of 18, it is very important to have a good alimentation and if they don’t care, they could have diseases, gain weight, and develop a bad physical condition. The diseases that you could get are associated with the heart and probably the most common disease is the heart attack. When you eat too much fast food, the most common problem is that you get fat and you will not make so many things because you are fat. And if you want to make sports, your physical condition won’t be the most appropriate. You will feel bad and frustrated that you can´t compete with the other people because of your overweight.

The fast food causes addiction and it creates dependence, promotes economic problems, and forces you to create excuses to eat all time. The dependence of the fast food is the same than that of the alcohol, cigarettes and drugs so you will want to eat all time. You know that fast food is not cheap so you must spend a lot of money buying fast food and you will have economic problems in the long run. And obviously the people who eat fast food all the time say a lot of excuses to keep eating; for example some people say that they have stress, nerves or depression and those are the reasons that they give as an excuse to continue eating all the time.

My friends, you have in your hands the feature of your life. Please don´t get an addiction and most importantly don’t get put your health in danger. The people under the age of 18 are in development and obviously your body is still growing. You can try to eat traditional food and make sports; and have a wonderful healthy life. The food is not everything in life. You can find some ways to get your mind away from the necessity of eating fast food. For example: you could make sports, talk with your friends, or study. You can make the difference in the feature if you don’t eat fast food. That’s the most important reason why it should be banned for those who are under the age of 18.

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Why should the fast food be banned for young people under the age of 18?

The food is very important for the health of the people because it gives energy, force, and support for the body. There are a lot of different types of food, the health food and the fast food. The people like more the fast food than the health food. Why (do) the people like more the fast food? It is simple(simply) because the flavor of this food is delicious and probably (this) is for the amount of oil that this food has. The group of people that more like(likes) this type of food is the young people under the age of 18. There are two important reasons that(why) the(this type of) food should be forbidden(,) for those guys(,)(;) because the (to protect their)health and the(to prevent an) addiction.

(For) The(the) people under the age of 18(, it) is very important to have a good alimentation and if they don’t care(,) they could have diseases, fatten(gain weight), and (develop a) bad physical condition. The diseases that you could get are associated to(with) the heart and probably the most common disease is the heart attack. When you eat so(too) much fast food(,) the most common problem is that you get fad(fat) and you will not make so many things because you are fat. And if you want to make sports(,) your physical condition (won’t be the most appropriate.) (You) will get(feel) bad and you will feel frustrated that you can´t compete with the other people (because of your overweight).

The fast food cause(causes) addiction and it involves(creates) dependence, (promotes) economic problems, and (forces you to create) excuses to eat all time. The dependence of the fast food is the same (than) that (of) the alcohol, cigarettes and drugs so you will want to eat all time. You know that fast food it is not cheap so you must expend(spend) a lot of money buying fast food and you will have economic problems in (the) long time(run). And obviously the people who eat (fast food) all (the) time say a lot of excuses to (keep) eat(eating;) for example some people say that they have stress, nerves or depression(;) and those are the reasons that they (give as an) excuse (to continue eating) all (the) time.

My friends(,) you gave(have) in your hands the feature of your life. Please don´t get an addiction and less (most importantly) don’t get(put) in danger your health (in danger). The people under the age of 18, they are in development and obviously your body (is) still growing. You can try to eat traditional food and make sports; and have a wonderful healthy life. The food is not only(everything) in life(.) you(You can) could find some ways to get out of your mind (away from) the necessity of eat(eating) fast food(.) for(For) example(: you could) make sports, talk with your friends, or study. You can make the difference in the feature if you don’t eat fast food under the age of 18. That’s the most important reason that(why) it should be banned (for those who are) under the age of 18.

Paper 2 Activity 4

Why should the fast food be banned for young people under the age of 18?

The food is very important for the health of the people because it gives energy, force, and support for the body. There are a lot of different types of food, the health food and the fast food. The people like more the fast food than the health food. Why the people like more the fast food? It is simple because the flavor of this food is delicious and probably is for the amount of oil that this food has. The group of people that more like this type of food is the young people under the age of 18. There are two important reasons that the food should be forbidden, for those guys, because the health and the addiction.

The people under the age of 18 is very important to have a good alimentation and if they don’t care they could have diseases, fatten, and bad physical condition. The diseases that you could get are associated to the heart and probably the most common disease is the heart attack. When you eat so much fast food the most common problem is that you get fad and you will not make so many things because you are fat. And if you want to make sports your physical condition will get bad and you will feel frustrated that you can´t compete with the other people.

The fast food cause addiction and it involves dependence, economic problems, and excuses to eat all time. The dependence of the fast food is the same that the alcohol, cigarettes and drugs so you will want to eat all time. You know that fast food it is not cheap so you must expend a lot of money buying fast food and you will have economic problems in long time. And obviously the people who eat all time say a lot of excuses to eat for example some people say that they have stress, nerves or depression; and those are the reasons that they excuse all time.

My friends you gave in your hands the feature of your life. Please don´t get an addiction and less don’t get in danger your health. The people under the age of 18, they are in development and obviously your body still growing. You can try to eat traditional food and make sports; and have a wonderful healthy life. The food is not only in life you could find some ways to get out of your mind the necessity of eat fast food for example: make sports, talk with your friends, or study. You can make the difference in the feature if you don’t eat fast food under the age of 18. That’s the most important reason that it should be banned under the age of 18.

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July 7 of 2011

Principal Asturias

El Roble

Guatemala

Mr. Asturias:

It is very important for the students to have clubs in the school. You know the development of the students is essential for the rest of their lives because it stimulates all the skills that the students need. A way to make that stimulation real is creating more clubs in the school. In the school are so many clubs for example the reading club, the writing club and the sport club. Some students ask me if it is possible to make a new club in the school. This proposal is about making the arts club because it will create stimulation to the students and it will have a lot advantages for the school.

The stimulation is very important to the people who like arts because it will create opportunities, hobbies, and goals for the students. The opportunities that the students can get will be expressing themselves in the way that they think for example painting a picture. A lot of people in this school like to paint and if you create this club you will create in them the habit to paint more and acquire a beneficial hobby rather than having them wasting their time. Finally, some students can have a very important goal in their lives which could be becoming famous artists.

Each day others schools are growing in popularity and we can not stay behind them. The advantages that we could have in the school will be more students, reputation, and scholarships. The people when they know about this important club they will want to be in the school to be a part of this club and that will create more students in the school. The reputation that the school will create with this club will be high because very few schools in Guatemala have an arts club. Making this club will open the door in other countries to get a scholarship because the students will have an integral education.

Mr. Asturias don´t wait for a long time to answer this important proposal because we want the best for this school. As you see, making the club will improve a lot of things for example the stimulation for the guys and a lot of benefits for the school. We could have the best artists in a couple of years. The teacher could be Mr. Chema because he is very smart and has a lot of skills to be a good guide of that club. You will see that a lot of students will want to be part of that club. You have the decision in your hands; you will see the results very soon. Respond as soon as possible Mr. Asturias.

Sincerely,

Gustavo Hernandez

Student´s President