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Why should the fast food be banned for young people under the age of 18?

The food is very important for the health of the people because it gives energy, force, and support for the body. There are a lot of different types of food, the health food and the fast food. The people like more the fast food than the health food. Why (do) the people like more the fast food? It is simple(simply) because the flavor of this food is delicious and probably (this) is for the amount of oil that this food has. The group of people that more like(likes) this type of food is the young people under the age of 18. There are two important reasons that(why) the(this type of) food should be forbidden(,) for those guys(,)(;) because the (to protect their)health and the(to prevent an) addiction.

(For) The(the) people under the age of 18(, it) is very important to have a good alimentation and if they don’t care(,) they could have diseases, fatten(gain weight), and (develop a) bad physical condition. The diseases that you could get are associated to(with) the heart and probably the most common disease is the heart attack. When you eat so(too) much fast food(,) the most common problem is that you get fad(fat) and you will not make so many things because you are fat. And if you want to make sports(,) your physical condition (won’t be the most appropriate.) (You) will get(feel) bad and you will feel frustrated that you can´t compete with the other people (because of your overweight).

The fast food cause(causes) addiction and it involves(creates) dependence, (promotes) economic problems, and (forces you to create) excuses to eat all time. The dependence of the fast food is the same (than) that (of) the alcohol, cigarettes and drugs so you will want to eat all time. You know that fast food it is not cheap so you must expend(spend) a lot of money buying fast food and you will have economic problems in (the) long time(run). And obviously the people who eat (fast food) all (the) time say a lot of excuses to (keep) eat(eating;) for example some people say that they have stress, nerves or depression(;) and those are the reasons that they (give as an) excuse (to continue eating) all (the) time.

My friends(,) you gave(have) in your hands the feature of your life. Please don´t get an addiction and less (most importantly) don’t get(put) in danger your health (in danger). The people under the age of 18, they are in development and obviously your body (is) still growing. You can try to eat traditional food and make sports; and have a wonderful healthy life. The food is not only(everything) in life(.) you(You can) could find some ways to get out of your mind (away from) the necessity of eat(eating) fast food(.) for(For) example(: you could) make sports, talk with your friends, or study. You can make the difference in the feature if you don’t eat fast food under the age of 18. That’s the most important reason that(why) it should be banned (for those who are) under the age of 18.