Writing 2

Write a paragraph about the reasons why teenagers do about anything to be a part of the group.

Oral Presentation

Teen Sex

According an article of UNICEF, in late adolescence (15-19 years), men are more likely to be sexually active than women of same age group. Why is the statement true? It is very simple because the hormones on men are more excited than women´s hormones. An article about men´s hormones revelated that: “to measure the influence of testosterone (male sex hormone) in sex. While it is true that we have demonstrated the relationship between blood testosterone level and sexual desire”It is also very important the place from where the people are. That is a very important factor. For example an article said that: “The region with the highest proportion of teenage girls who claim to have initiated sex before age 15 (22%) is Latin America and the Caribbean” Especially in coasts, borders and warm places it's easier to have sex than in other places.

The reasons are: "education level, little sex education, little contraceptives information, and use of drogs." (cienciaysalud.curn.edu.co/vol2010/17.pdf) Also another reason is when the guy asks his girlfriend if she wants to give him the test of love a lot of women think about the situation and ask themselves, why do I need to have sex? Those women are intelligent. But a lot of women don´t think about the situation and they are driven by their boyfriends. And the consecuence is that "almost 1 in 3 female teens (31%) who have had sexual experience have become pregnant while still in the adolescence” Revealed the article in the News Paper “La Nación”. Also the religion is very important because it provides the precept of not having sex until marriage. But again the decision is crucial and depends on each person. Men don´t usually think in their future, they only want to live the moment. Real sex is not the only way to get satisfacion “an investigation estimated 80% of young people of 13 years masturbate.” (guiajuvenil.com/educacion-sexual/la-masturbacion-en-la-adolescencia.html) That is because they want to start to feel new feelings.

The problem to live the moment is that the decisions are not always the best. We need to think in our future. Because "adolescents and young adults who are sexually active get 1 out of 2 (50%) new STD infections each year.” Revealed the inform of Rebeca Madrigal from the News Paper “La Nación”. Also "many teens believe that if they have oral sex but not sex, not contract an STD. Obviously, this is not true. Many STDs can be transmitted through oral sex.” Explain an article in the page www.4parents.gov/espanol/SexoyConductas/AlgunosFactores/index.html. We need to take the right decisions to plan every day of the rest of our lives. Are you living your life in the right way or you are wasting your life? We need to wait for marriage to have sex and give that incredible moment to our wives. Now, are you going to get driven to have sex in adverse situations?

Review

According an article of UNICEF, in late adolescence (15-19 years), men have(are) more likely to be sexually active high risk than women of same age group. Why is the statement thrue(true)? It is very simple because the hormones on men are more excited than women´s hormones. Also its(It is also) very important the place of(from) where is the people(are). That is a very important factor(.) for(For) example in(:) coast(coasts), borders and warm places its(it's) easier to have sex that(than in) other places.

The reason is that the hormonones are influenced by the altitude. At more altitude (it) is less posibility(possible) to get sex than (at) less altitude because of the weather. Also another reason is when the guy ask(asks) his girlfriend if she want(wants) to give him the test of love(.) A(a) lot of women think (about) the situation and ask herselves(themselves), why do I need to have sex? Those women are intelligent. But a lot of women don´t think(about) the situation and they are driven by her(their) boyfriend(boyfriends). Actually the religion(Religion) its(is) very important because it has(provides) the precepts(precept of not) to have(having) sex until the marriage. But again the decision its(is) crucial and depends of(on) each person. In the other hand we have men guys the most thing if it is a posibility to have sex they make. They(Men) don´t (usually) think in their future(,) only they (only) want to live the moment.

The problem to live the moment its(is) that the decisions (are) not always are the best. We need to think in our future. We need to take the right decisions to plan every day of the rest of our lifes(lives). Like a story said(which story?): "Are you living your life or you are wasting your life? If we were in bad situations that involve sex, you will think in your future what things do you want to make in yor life. And you will take the right decition. It is up to you, the desition its in our hands. We need to wait for marriage to have sex and give it to our wifes that incredible moment (to our wives). Now, are you going to get driven to have sex in adverse situations?

Oral Presentation

Why do teens think about sex?

According an article of UNICEF, in late adolescence (15-19 years), men have more likely to be sexually active high risk than women of same age group. Why is the statement thrue? It is very simple because the hormones on men are more excited than women´s hormones. Also its very important the place of where is the people. That is a very important factor for example in: coast, borders and warm places its easier to have sex that other places.

The reason is that the hormonones are influenced by the altitude. At more altitude is less posibility to get sex than less altitude because of the weather. Also another reason is when the guy ask his girlfriend if she want to give him the test of love. A lot of women think the situation and ask herselves, why do I need to have sex? Those women are intelligent. But a lot of women don´t think the situation and they are driven by her boyfriend. Actually the religion its very important because it has the precepts to have sex until the marriage. But again the decision its crucial and depends of each person. In the other hand we have men guys the most thing if it is a posibility to have sex they make. They don´t think in their future only they want to live the moment.

The problem to live the moment its that the decisions not always are the best. We need to think in our future. We need to take the right decisions to plan every day of the rest of our lifes. Like a story said: "Are you living your life or you are wasting your life? If we were in bad situations that involve sex, you will think in your future what things do you want to make in yor life. And you will take the right decition. It is up to you, the desition its in our hands. We need to wait for marriage to have sex and give it to our wifes that incredible moment. Now, are you going to get driven to have sex in adverse situations?

Effects of Smoking

When you started to smoke, did you imagine the diseases and the cost that it would include? The person who smokes has a lot of probabilities to get diseases for example: cancer, bad breath, and yellow teeth. The most dangerous is cancer because it kills the person in a slow way.The most common cancer is lung cancer. Bad breath is disgusting not for the smoker but it is unpleasant for the people who are around the puffer. Also the yellow teeth is a consequence of smoking frequently. The smokers will make anything to get their cigars. In the short term they could ask someone to lend them money so they can go buy their vice. In the long term they will have a debt and as a consequence of this they will have a lot of problems. Now, would you become a smoker, knowing the diseases and the cost of smoking?

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Effects of Smoking

When you started to smoke, did you imagine the diseases and the cost that it would include? The person who smokes has a lot of probabilities to get diseases for example: cancer, bad breath, and yellow teeth. The most dangerous is cancer because it kills the person in a slow way.The most common cancer is lung cancer. Bad breath is disgusting not for the smoker but it is unpleasant for the people who are around the puffer. Also the yellow teeth are a consequence of smoking frequently. The smokers will make anything to get their cigars. In the short term they could ask someone to lend them money so they can go buy their vice. In the long term they will have a debt and as a consequence of this they will have a lot of problems. Now, would you become a smoker, knowing the diseases and the cost of smoking?