jueves, 30 de junio de 2011

Review

The students need all the attention in the school, but if they used(use) the cell phone, they will get distraction(distracted), addiction(addicted), and scolding(scolded). Mainly the worst problem (students face) is the distraction in classes and the result is that (it) make(makes) the students get bad grades. The addiction (students develop) is the necessity to be communicated all time with their friends (all time). Because with(With) the new technology (that allows phones) to have internet in the cell phones the people is(are) communicated all time for example with the Blackberry and the I-phone. Another important factor is the scolding because when the students use the cell phones in the school(,) the teachers scold them and that will create a serious problem in the attitude of the students of the school. Summarizing(,) the use of cell phones in school should be forbidden because they create distraction, addiction, and scolding for the students.

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